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bagheera_sanScene by scene:
1) Superheroes! Fighting on rooftops! Rapelling off buildings! Wearing cool boots and fishnets!
2) That whole conversation between Clark and Chloe was just incredibly cute.
3) And Clark barging into Ollie's place with, "You put Chloe into danger!" just smacked so much of his modus operandi with Lex. This is totally what Superman is going to be like (poor, poor Justice League). But seriously, Clark, you don't OWN Chloe. She can go risk her life with whomever she wants.
4) WTF. Lana with glasses!!! And Lionel, as always is the voice of truth: Lana hasn't told Clark any of the stuff she told Bizarro. (I love you, show!) Why does Lana have to wear sleeveless tops of evil for her hacking, though?
5) Yes, Lana! You killed the one you were meant to be with. Bizana forever! Seriously, that was a real, aggressive argument between Clark and Lana. I'm impressed.
6) Woah, woah, wait... Lois doesn't know yet that Grant is dead, right? I was with Lois on "OMG" when she saw the Arrow stuff, though :D And, wow, what's with all this "continuity" in Lois's dialogue? SV, you astound me! I loved the call-back to the fake!Arrow kiss.
7) Canary cry vs. Superman! And she wins!
8) "Well, aren't you clever." Oh Lionel. *hearts* And then, "So... this is... because you have my best interests at heart."
9) The fight at the mansion. Lex's sudden and surprising ability to fight! Clark's little look of, "Oh shit!" when he comes in and everyone is shooting everyone else. His saving Canary, which is smart and right, because Lex's wound wouldn't have been fatal anyways. And then Lex wounded on the floor (and just so... "shit...not again" about it all) and Arrow just walks out with a quip - I feel like I'm watching some kind of Justice League show :D
10) Lois: "You don't know Ollie like I do. There are parts of him you have never seen." - Clark: "... that's a given." LOL.
But why did we just get a ton of reasons why Clois will never work? Is Lois going to lose her personality or what?
11) Why must all female superheroes (all two of them... Kara doesn't really count yet) on SV have to be misguided and impulsive and quit in the end? This sucked. I wanted Arrow and Canary to rappel off into the moonrise! Canary, maybe!Huntress and Lana and/or Chloe need to form the Birds of Prey ASAP.
12) Best almost-break-up ever! "We can't be together because of meta, Clark. The fictional universe we live in - and you're starting to suspect this - doesn't allow it!"
All in all, very fun! Good writing :D
Fracture was good, but too serious and complicated to comment.
1) Superheroes! Fighting on rooftops! Rapelling off buildings! Wearing cool boots and fishnets!
2) That whole conversation between Clark and Chloe was just incredibly cute.
3) And Clark barging into Ollie's place with, "You put Chloe into danger!" just smacked so much of his modus operandi with Lex. This is totally what Superman is going to be like (poor, poor Justice League). But seriously, Clark, you don't OWN Chloe. She can go risk her life with whomever she wants.
4) WTF. Lana with glasses!!! And Lionel, as always is the voice of truth: Lana hasn't told Clark any of the stuff she told Bizarro. (I love you, show!) Why does Lana have to wear sleeveless tops of evil for her hacking, though?
5) Yes, Lana! You killed the one you were meant to be with. Bizana forever! Seriously, that was a real, aggressive argument between Clark and Lana. I'm impressed.
6) Woah, woah, wait... Lois doesn't know yet that Grant is dead, right? I was with Lois on "OMG" when she saw the Arrow stuff, though :D And, wow, what's with all this "continuity" in Lois's dialogue? SV, you astound me! I loved the call-back to the fake!Arrow kiss.
7) Canary cry vs. Superman! And she wins!
8) "Well, aren't you clever." Oh Lionel. *hearts* And then, "So... this is... because you have my best interests at heart."
9) The fight at the mansion. Lex's sudden and surprising ability to fight! Clark's little look of, "Oh shit!" when he comes in and everyone is shooting everyone else. His saving Canary, which is smart and right, because Lex's wound wouldn't have been fatal anyways. And then Lex wounded on the floor (and just so... "shit...not again" about it all) and Arrow just walks out with a quip - I feel like I'm watching some kind of Justice League show :D
10) Lois: "You don't know Ollie like I do. There are parts of him you have never seen." - Clark: "... that's a given." LOL.
But why did we just get a ton of reasons why Clois will never work? Is Lois going to lose her personality or what?
11) Why must all female superheroes (all two of them... Kara doesn't really count yet) on SV have to be misguided and impulsive and quit in the end? This sucked. I wanted Arrow and Canary to rappel off into the moonrise! Canary, maybe!Huntress and Lana and/or Chloe need to form the Birds of Prey ASAP.
12) Best almost-break-up ever! "We can't be together because of meta, Clark. The fictional universe we live in - and you're starting to suspect this - doesn't allow it!"
All in all, very fun! Good writing :D
Fracture was good, but too serious and complicated to comment.
