Oh, yay! Yayity! I'm so happy Lois was only working there as part of her secret plan to free Chloe! *Bounces with excitement* And you even have Lois/Ollie, which makes me SO happy.
But I think what I loved most about this chapter was how well you conveyed how completely bewildered Clark is the whole time, and how overcome by all this yucky human touching, but he secretly likes it, just like he has the impulses to do the right thing.
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Date: 2007-08-15 05:11 pm (UTC)But I think what I loved most about this chapter was how well you conveyed how completely bewildered Clark is the whole time, and how overcome by all this yucky human touching, but he secretly likes it, just like he has the impulses to do the right thing.
YAY!!!!!! I love this story!