If they'd have the other characters recognize/validate some of her flaws, it would help a lot. IMO, it's human nature that, if all you keep hearing is how great someone is, and you can SEE that their actions and nonactions prove they're NOT, it makes you hate them!
I've used Lana in a few fics; I don't relate easily to her, but I always try to find that interesting character I know is in there somewhere, and, according to comments, occasionally succeed.
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Date: 2007-05-21 03:27 pm (UTC)I've used Lana in a few fics; I don't relate easily to her, but I always try to find that interesting character I know is in there somewhere, and, according to comments, occasionally succeed.