A third comment: Your prose is so wistful, almost dreamy - it truly conveys a sinister overtone that is separate from the story itself. It's haunting, and sad and yet one senses just through word choice and arrangement that there is more than what can be seen here.
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Date: 2007-02-25 11:30 am (UTC)Thanks! *blushes*