what you say about eleven here is one of the things i particularly like about this fic - it has a very good, self-conscious and tired eleven, which is something i'd never have pointed at before but agree is true. it works very well - and i like that they settle down and write books and also the ending is brilliant! i have the vague feeling erin hates utopia (although maybe she doesn't), but as someone who hasn't read it and just likes the pure symbolism of the thing - i think it's a very good ending to a fic.

what else? oh yes! good work reviving the fandom. long may it continue.

and you also made me think 'yes, i suppose the coat is ok...' (and i like that benny has her own hall. nice touch).