This is spell-binding - I was on the edge of my seat. Your description of Clark's self-furnished Hell is incredibly evocative.
I also like how much wisdom Clark has gained over the years. This bit...
"Clark looks at the guide's featureless mask. "There are always others I could be saving," he answers. It's a hard-learned lesson, but one that he has learned to accept. "As long as you're saving someone, it's the best you can do.""
....shows just how much he has grown into being Superman.
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Date: 2007-02-10 11:34 pm (UTC)I also like how much wisdom Clark has gained over the years. This bit...
"Clark looks at the guide's featureless mask. "There are always others I could be saving," he answers. It's a hard-learned lesson, but one that he has learned to accept. "As long as you're saving someone, it's the best you can do.""
....shows just how much he has grown into being Superman.